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Tuesday, January 29, 2013

it's the time

time in my life
time in my death
it's the time when I cry
it's the time when I'm happy
it's the time when sadness  turn into happiness
it's the time when tears turn into smile
it's the time when fire turn into water
it's the time when impossible becomes possible
it's the time when.......


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  1. UnknownJanuary 29, 2013 at 11:32 PM

    it's the time when we have to face everything in our life :)
    I think your poem tells me about the emptiness value in life. Time always ticks and life always goes on. We never know what it is going to be. Time, the thing we never see as our best friend in life.
    -DY-
    :)

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    1. Raenidewi January 30, 2013 at 11:44 AM

      I like your sentence to complete the last phrase "it's the time when we have to face everything in our life :)" , it's damn awesome :p

      yeap we've to manage our time well , thanks my pal Dee , hug n kiss vo u :)

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  2. UnknownJanuary 30, 2013 at 10:18 PM

    Thank you for your warmly compliment. I know you are such a good poet. Were we in the same poetry class with Danielle? You are a good writer. Keep moving forward and it'll be my pleasure if I'll be your novel/story's reader :)

    Hug you back o(^_^)o

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  3. Raenidewi January 31, 2013 at 12:07 PM

    thanks a million dee :*, yeap we were
    You are also a good writer, I must learn from you... hehhehe
    Thanks a ton dee :*

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